Showing posts with label Pumopoet. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Pumopoet. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Ripped

Here's my entry for #SisiyamNaLinya (#Sisiyam) or #9Liners:

And now the pain is inevitable
Will you lend a hand?
I just don’t know if this is sensible,
Enough to the clout to run,
Escape from the reality and be invincible.
Even just for once I triumph; and
My presence will become powerful;
And my thoughts are medicines that cures the wound
You left when you derelict my core…


-YU


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Author's Explanation:

This happens when you came from breakups or from suffering, you totally felt ripped. It hurts like you were being torn apart. Everyone parts of you hurts that you no longer want to wake up and kill yourself just to stop your current state but you can't because you know it should end like that else you have lost not only to the person or the situation who made you fall into your situation but also to yourself. Because giving up on yourself is the ultimate distraction. This you let you feel the worst situation you have but should make you realize that you can still stand and you can still mend from your current situation.

Let's take it by line:

And now the pain is inevitable
Will you lend a hand?

You question and request for help when you no longer can carry the pain.

I just don’t know if this is sensible,
Enough to the clout to run,
Escape from the reality and be invincible.

When you thought your no longer have the strength but you still think on running, away from it all or just running to free off your mind. To be inevitable out of all these hurting.

Even just for once I triumph; and
My presence will become powerful;
And my thoughts are medicines that cures the wound

When you wanted to feel powerful and invincible so you can simply snap your fingers to remove your devastated situation and make you triumph your misery. And pretend, pretend that you can live it all everyday, though hurting; still fighting.

You left when you derelict my core…

Then you tell that person how poor you were when after they have used you and your wealth. This is to tell yourself that you are just used up in the situation and that letting go of the destruction will let you become better.


Hope you liked this poem and can give you inspiration. When you're down the only way is going up!

#SisiyamNaLinya #Sisiyam #9Liners

You can follow me at IG: iamyukon for updates on my poems.

Monday, August 31, 2015

Project Sisiyam Na Linya

I've been working on some poems lately. Poems that are short and hopefully works to every person who found these poems relational to their day to day lives and their current situation.

I started calling them "Sisiyam na Linya" or #SisiyamNaLinya which mean 9 Liners.

I put a rule in creating these poems before it can be considered Sisiyam. Following are the criteria I've made for you to consider it as one:


  1. One (1) Stanza only.
  2. Nine (9) lines only.
  3. Alternating Rhymes (where line 1, 3,5,7,9 should rhyme and line 2,4,6,8 should rhyme)
It's quite simple and I hope you can create one. It can be of any language, so let have those creative juices work as poems can help us distress and as well as let lose at some point.

Here's my sample and hope you like it:

Title: Ripped
by: Yu Kaito


And now the pain is inevitable
Will you lend a hand?
I just don’t know if this is sensible,
Enough to the clout to run,
Escape from the reality and be invincible.
Even just for once I triumph; and
My presence will become powerful;
And my thoughts are medicines that cures the wound
You left when you derelict my core…



I will shortly create an article to explain #Ripped.

For those who will be creating Sisiyams please use #Sisiyam or #SisiyamNaLinya or #9Liners.

You can follow me at IG: iamyukon for updates on my poems.


Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Kiss Me in the Morning



I have longed for your warmth...
I don't know how to count the days anymore...
It's been awhile since I saw the sun...
It's been awhile
And I am missing when you kiss me in the morning...
Now is like kissing the cold breeze...

This photo was taken by yours truly the day after our unplanned and an aleatory of our Mt. Pulag trip. This is supposedly a climb to Mt. Malasimbo but we decided to just stay at Mt. Talipanan on a rainy over night. Then went down to White Beach for some exciting wave slamming session with Rhose, Ryan, and Tonton.